Finally caught up to the latest comic, here’s a few comments:
1) Great storyline, fantastic!!
2) The colors are good, but often the color of the background and the characters are too similar, so the characters don’t stand out and it makes the comic look kinda bland.
3) Noticed that the comic made the transition to include nudity. Combined with the sexual topics, it’s going to end up costing you some readers. I’m curious as to why you choose to include nudity. Also, the breasts are shaped like lemons, a little strange I think. However, the asses look great.
I decided to include nudity because I enjoy drawing nude bodies every now and then and quite a few readers asked for it. There’s still a ‘clean’ version on smack jeeves. I also won’t be including loads of nudity-there won’t be any more than there was before-I just won’t pixilate it when it does occur 🙂 Thanks a lot for the feedback. I’ll keep working to try and improve.
Possible small typo – panel 4 ” to out mates” – did you mean ‘to our mates’?
Also – nicely done on the reveal.
Great face fault as well. Taury just needs to get a cigar to complete the picture.
Thanks 🙂 I make a lot of mistakes. I check through many times but sometimes I read what it should be rather than what’s actually written down 😉
It happens to all of us, our brains know what we want to type/write/say but it comes out wrong without us knowing
I shall follow the lizardman’s example.
“Facewall”
They are so alike it is just a shock they dont say it, the lizard man is right . We must follow his example untill they figure it out
http://www.hahastop.com/pictures/Facecouch.jpg
Finally caught up to the latest comic, here’s a few comments:
1) Great storyline, fantastic!!
2) The colors are good, but often the color of the background and the characters are too similar, so the characters don’t stand out and it makes the comic look kinda bland.
3) Noticed that the comic made the transition to include nudity. Combined with the sexual topics, it’s going to end up costing you some readers. I’m curious as to why you choose to include nudity. Also, the breasts are shaped like lemons, a little strange I think. However, the asses look great.
Great comic, I look forward to future issues.
I decided to include nudity because I enjoy drawing nude bodies every now and then and quite a few readers asked for it. There’s still a ‘clean’ version on smack jeeves. I also won’t be including loads of nudity-there won’t be any more than there was before-I just won’t pixilate it when it does occur 🙂 Thanks a lot for the feedback. I’ll keep working to try and improve.
and here i tought nudity gave more readers :O. Especially when its just silly nudity
Epic Facepalm!